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预测作文(一)

My View on Double BA Degree

1. 现在大学生读双学位的现象很常见2. 我对这一现象的看法【范文】

Recently it has become a common phenomenon for college students to have two majors at the same time. In this way, they can get double BA degrees when they graduate from the university several years later.

Although it may bring unfavorable consequences, we can be sure to conclude that this practice is favorable on the whole. To begin with, most students will become more hardworking and efficient in order to finish the learning tasks satisfactorily. Moreover, with two degrees at hand after graduation, they will stand a better chance in the job market full of fierce competition. In the third place, as for today's university students, tuition and fees are becoming more and more expensive. If they can make achievements in study at school and find a satisfactory job afterwards, it will not be a big problem.

Weighing the pros and cons of such a new trend, we can naturally arrive at the conclusion that it is beneficial and rewarding. This system not only compels students to work hard, but also prepares them for the coming competition.【点评】 首段直接点题,说明现象;第二段分述三个优点,其中首句为让步状语从句,意思是―虽然可能带来负面的后果,但总体上是有益的‖;第三段呼应第二段,得出结论。

范文首段提出大学生读双学位这一普遍现象;第二段分三点进行论述,其中前两点是优点,即学生会更加勤奋,并且有利于他们在激烈的求职市场中找到工作,最后一点是解释可能带来的学费问题并不严重;第三段下结论,呼应第二段。 第二段第三句中的stand a better chance(of)表示―大有希望‖;第三段末句中的compel sb.to do sth.表示―迫使某人做某事‖。

预测作文(二)Opening Psychological Courses

1. 许多人建议大学开设心理课程2. 我对这一问题的看法【范文】

Recently more and more educator and common citizens suggest that universities colleges open more courses which are helpful for students' psychological health. Personally, I fully agree with their proposal for the following reasons.

On the one hand, the ever-increasing pressure of study at the moment and job-hunting in the future may lead to many psychological problems such as anxiety, depression and even despair, and the psychological courses open a door for communication and relaxation. On the other hand, such courses can teach students how to regulate feelings and emotions under different situations, which is a good preparation for the future life in the complex social network. Finally, these courses also introduce good habits which are conducive to mental and psychological health. To be mature and qualified citizens in the society, students have to do more than study hard.

In a word, I warmly welcome the establishment of psychological courses in universities. In my mind, they are good for students' psychological development.【点评】

首段提出主题,其中第二句为过渡句,引出下文;第二段提出三点同意的理由;最后一段得出结论,与第一段首句呼应,其中第二句是解释型的补充说明句。 范文首段提出许多人建议大学开设心理课程。作者同意这一建议,并分三点在第二段中叙述理由。首先,目前的学习以及将来的就业压力需要开设心理课程。其次,教会学生如何调整在不同环境下的情绪。最后,给学生介绍有利于其身心健康的好习惯。第三段总结呼应首段内容。

第二段第一点中的ever-increasing表示―一直在增加的‖,修饰两个名词词组,对比鲜明,at the moment表示―现在‖,in the future表示―将来‖,open a door for…表示―开启了……之门‖;第二点中的regulate表示―调节,控制‖;第三点中的conducive表示―有益于……的‖,后接介词to。

预测作文(三)Advantages and Disadvantages of Electronic Dictionary 1. 电子辞典的优点2. 电子辞典的缺点3. 我的结论【范文】

The discussion about electronic dictionaries has never stopped in the past few years. Let's have a look at its advantages and disadvantages before drawing the final conclusion. The biggest advantage of an electronic dictionary is its convenience. Whenever you meet new words or expressions, you can know the meaning quickly. What's more, with the development of science and technology, electronic dictionaries are becoming more and more advanced: they can pronounce the words clearly, provide sample sentences to illustrate word usage and store difficult words for special memorization. Last but by no means the least, electronic dictionaries are becoming cheaper and cheaper, and more and more students can afford them.

However, the negative effects are also obvious. To begin with, some students rely too much on the electronic dictionary—they never put their heart into learning new words and expressions. In the second place, some explanations are neither complete nor accurate, which are quite misleading. Finally, new technical inventions do not necessarily lead to progress in learning. Diligence is always the decisive factor, because \road to learning\

Up until now, we can see it clearly that an electronic dictionary is not beneficial or harmful in itself. The key lies in the user—so long as we can make proper use of it, it can be most helpful to us in many respects.【点评】

首段提出一个长时间争论的话题;第二段中指出该事物的优点;第三段阐述缺点;第四段首句下结论,表明此事物本身无对错,第二句指出关键在于使用者,即如果合理使用,就会从中受益。

范文首段指出,有关电子辞典的讨论从来没有停止过;第二段阐述优点,即电子辞典便于查询,而且随着技术的发展,电子辞典功能也越来越多,另外价钱也越来越低;第三段提出缺点,电子辞典让学生产生依赖心理,而且有些解释不准确,另外技术的进步不一定带来学习上的进步;最后一段总结,电子辞典本身无对错,关键在于正确使用以便为我们服务。 第二段第三句中的illustrate表示―用图或例子来说明‖;第三点中的afford表示―买得起‖。第三段第一点中的rely too much on表示―过分依赖‖;put one's heart into doing sth.表示―专心致志于某事‖;第二点中的accurate表示―精确的‖,misleading表示―使人误解的‖;第三点第二句中的decisive factor表示―决定因素‖。

预测作文(四)Teenagers' Studying Abroad

1. 现在有很多青少年出国留学2 有些人认为这种做法是有益的3 我认为这种观点是不的 Recently it seems that among the students who choose to study abroad, there are more and more-teenagers who study in high schools or even elementary schools. Many people,

especially the parents, think it will certainly do good to their chidren because the independent life will make them learn confidence and perseverance. Moreover, the quality of overseas education is often higher, thus the child stands a better chance of entering a better university and getting a better job in the future.

After careful consideration, I have to say the above view is more than biased. On the one hand, early independent life is not necessarily good, if the child cannot receive proper guidance and tender care from both teachers and parents. On the other hand, the educational quality is also a question—too many foreign schools aim at earning money. When the children come back, who can guarantee that they can adapt to the fierce competition here?

We can see clearly that although teenagers' studying abroad may bring favorable results, there are still a lot to worry about. It seems necessary for young students to make a careful investigation before going abroad.【点评】 第一段指出当前某种普遍的做法,之后分两点阐述人们支持这种做法的原因;第二段首句鲜明地指出自己反驳的意见,然后分两点来阐述理由;最后一段进行总结,并请当事人在做出决定前多加斟酌。

范文首句点题,指出青少年留学这一现象,并给出支持者的理由,即独立的生活会教会他们自信和坚持不懈,而且国外的教学水平会让学生进入更好的大学、找到更好的工作。第二段给出反对理由。首先,早期独立不一定是件好事。另外,太多的国外学校的目标是挣钱,所以它们的教学质量是令人质疑的。末段总结说青少年留学可能会带来好处,但令人担忧的问题也很多。

第一段第三句中的stand a better chance of表示―有更好的机会做某事‖。第二段首句中的biased表示―偏激的,存有偏见的‖;第三句中的aim at表示―目的在于‖;第四句中的guarantee表示―保证‖,adapt to表示―适应‖,fierce表示―激烈的‖,修饰competition(竞争)。 预测作文(五)

How to Eliminate Cheating on Campus

1. 当前校园中存在许多作弊现象2. 解决这一问题的办法是……【范文】

Nowadays. instead of listening attentively in class and working hard after class, a number of students adopt all kinds of dishonest methods to get high scores in examinations. It has become such a serious problem that it has aroused the concern from the whole society. To put an end to such a serious problem, in my mind., it calls for the efforts from all sides. First of all, the university authority should make it clear that any cheating behaviors in the examinations, from whispering and copying, receiving answers via mobile phones to asking ringers for help, will be severely punished with no exception. Moreover, teachers of all subjects should go all the way to restore honesty by setting an example for the youth through speaking sincerely and behaving truthfully. Last but not least, young students, the future of our nation, should view integrity as the prerequisite to an upright and responsible citizen so as to learn to despise and fight dishonest behaviors throughout the society. How can anybody expect to lead a meaningful life until he is far from any kind of cheating behaviors? Only when all of us join in the efforts of eliminating cheating at all levels can we expect to have a cleaner society and a more beautiful future.【点评】 首段描述一个引起全社会关注的社会现象或问题,并在第二段中给出三个解决办法;末段使用反问句和only引导的倒装句回应主题,效果强烈。 范文首先指出,当前校园中存在的严重的作弊问题已经引起全社会的广泛关注;第二段

阐述解决办法。首先,大学应明确任何形式的作弊都会受到惩罚。其次,老师要以身作则,为学生树立榜样。另外,学生应该把诚实作为当一个好公民的必要条件。末段指出,只有同心协力,才能解决校园作弊问题。

第二段第一句中的put an end to表示―结束,终止‖,call for表示―要求,需要‖;第一点中via指―通过‖,with no exception指―没有例外‖。第二点中的go all the way to表示―全力以赴‖,restore在文中指―重塑‖,set an example for表示―为……做榜样‖,speaking sincerely and behaving truthfully表示―说话真诚,行为诚实‖。第三点中的integrity指―诚实,诚信‖,prerequisite指―先决条件‖,后接介词for或to;despise表示―蔑视‖。

1. 现在大学校园里,迟到、早退、旷课是常见的现象2. 保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性3. 作为一个大学生应该怎样做 Attend Your Classes Regularly

Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny problem to both the students and teachers.

In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students. Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future.

Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on. And some day we‘ll benefit from it.

点评:2008年元月三日,中山大学博士发帖称遭导师虐待;2008年元月四日,中国政法大学爆―杨帆门‖事件;近几年,中小学老师或打学生或猥亵学生、体罚学生等各类新闻不断曝光,进而引发了师生关系的大讨论。本预测题为四级考试传统的问题解决型的写作,与校园生活密切相关。

1. 学生给老师打分已经普遍2. 人们对其持不同态度3. 我的看法 Students‘ Rating of Their Teachers

Nowadays, it has become as common in colleges and universities for students to grade teachers as for teachers to grade students. In some universities students‘ rating has even become the only source of information on teaching effectiveness..

This, however, has caused great controversy. Some are in favor of the rating system, They hold that since students attend the teachers‘ classes every day, they should have their opinion about their teachers‘ effectiveness. Others, on the contrary, are strongly against it. They believe that there is much more to teaching than what is shown on

students‘ rating forms. Students should not be expected to judge whether the materials they use are up to date or how well the teacher knows about the subject. These

judgments require professional knowledge, which is best left for the teachers‘ colleagues. I think students‘ rating of their teachers is necessary, but it should be conducted in a way that can really shed meaningful light on teachers‘ performance. Instead of rating the teachers‘ knowledge on the subject, students should be asked to estimate what they have learned in a course, and to report on such things as a teacher‘s ability to communicate with students, his or her relationship with students, and his or her ability to arouse students‘ interest in the subject.

点评:越来越多的高校采取让学生给老师打分的形式来了解教学反馈,并以此作为促进教学质量的有效手段。对此做法,管理部门及教学双方褒贬不一,看法迥异。本预测题为校园生活热议话题,值得关注。

1. 宿舍生活有时会出现不和谐的情况;2. 一个和谐宿舍生活的必要性;3. 如何创造和谐的宿舍生活。On a Harmonious Dormitory Life

Dormitory life is an indispensable part of college life. But sometimes the harmony in the dormitory be disturbed in one way or another.

As is known to all, a harmonious dormitory life is important to college students and benefits all the members. On one hand, we can have a good rest and put our heart into study. On the other hand, we will have a good mood and enjoy being together. There are several ways to create and maintain a harmonious dormitory life. Firstly, you have to evaluate your life-style and try to get rid of your dirty habits, if there are any. Secondly, when an annoying situation arises, you‘ll just have to learn to tolerate each other and co-exist. Thirdly, you‘ll have to share with each other and make good friends. In conclusion, we should try our best to build a harmonious dormitory life for the sake of good study and good life.

点评:―和谐‖成为我们当今社会词频概率最高用词,就社会而言,倡导建立和谐社会;就家庭而言,提倡建设和谐家庭;就校园来讲,则要建立和谐校园;和谐两字似乎无所不在,大学生宿舍生活同样需要和谐。本预测题与四级考试热点密切相关,又为典型的校园生活主题,值得关注。

假设你是一名学生志愿者,要给来你们学校参观的外国朋友介绍学校情况。内容应包括学校历史、规模、教学现状以及未来目标等。 A Brief Introduction to the University Distinguished guests,

Welcome to our university. Before you start to look around, allow me to give you a brief account of the school.

Founded in 1927, our university is one of this city‘s earliest universities of liberal arts. It is staffed with an excellent faculty, and has a total enrollment of over 10,000 students. In the past years, it has turned out numerous well-qualified students and found its graduates

endeavor.

Although it is an old saying,― no pains no gains‖ has its profound and realistic significance in our college studies. To acquire knowledge in a particular field and to attain any academic goals, great exertion and persistent effort are undoubtedly required because we all know that ―No pains, no gains.‖

点评:该预测题与四级1997年1月作文命题类似,属于论证道理性的解释性说明文写作,已有多年未考,值得关注。根据此类作文命题规律,第一段对这一格言所蕴涵的意义做了解释和界定。第二段举例说明了其哲理性;最后一段说明它的现实意义,重述主题。 1. 一些学生赞成讲座式教学2. 另一些学生偏爱讨论式教学3. 你的看法 Lectures and Discussions

There is a heated debate over the role of lectures and discussions in the classroom. Some people believe that lectures can help students learn more quickly. In contrast, others hold that discussions can stimulate students to learn by themselves.

Those who hold the first opinion suggest that students attend more lectures. In their view, by giving lectures teachers help students master the knowledge they‘ve accumulated over years of study and research. However, others think that in a discussion, the teacher usually guides the students instead of dominating them. They argue that to get involved in a discussion, students have to develop their ability to analyze problems independently. In my opinion, I stand on the side of neither idea. First of all, either method has its disadvantages. Furthermore, each student has his or her preference. Thirdly, lectures ate preferable to discussions in the teaching of science subjects, and on the contrary, discussions are preferable to lectures in studying the humanities. Therefore, we should adopt different teaching methods according to different subjects.

点评:2007年12月考查了大学生选修课话题,再次证明四级作文命题自2003年以后侧重于校园生活话题,该预测与校园生活联系紧密,为四级作文命题经常关注的话题。本文属于对比观点加作者态度型的议论文写作。

1. 目前网络教育形成热潮2. 你认为这股热潮形成的原因3. 你对网络教育的评价 My View on Online Education.

Being online is no longer something new or fresh in our life. To some extent, it has become part of our daily life. We can do a lot of things online, such as searching for information and communicating with friends far away. But recently another helpful online activity has become very ―in‖. That is online education.

Why could online education be so popular within such a short period of time? Among other reasons, the quick development of the Internet should be an essential one, which makes all our dreams of attending class in the distance possible. Another underlying reason is the quick development of both society and technology. Today, modern science and technology is developing with fantastic speed. To catch up with this development we all feel an urgent and strong desire to study. However, due to the great pace of modern

society, many people are too busy to study full time at school. Online education just comes to their aid.

Personally, I appreciate this new form of education. It‘s indeed a helpful complement to the traditional educational means. It can provide different learners with more flexible and versatile ways of learning. Best of all, with online education, we can stick to our jobs and at the same time study and absorb the latest knowledge.

点评:英特网的迅速发展改变了人们的生活和学习、工作方式,现代生活节奏快、工作忙导致人们没时间全日制的学习,网络和远程教育正好满足了人们的学习需要,许多大学生利用因特网学习知识,它成为传统教学的有益补充。本预测题贴近时代,也与大学生校园生活相关,值得重视。

1. 中国的污染的现状2. 造成污染的原因3. 解决的办法 Pollution: An Increasing Concern in China

It is reported that ten big cities in China are being ranked among the top twenty cities with the highest pollution index in the world. This means it is high time we did something to bring the situation under control.

Many factors are contributing to the deteriorating situation: industrial wastes pumped into the air, the lakes and rivers; a increasing number of automobiles crowding into the streets; the widespread use of plastic bags etc.

To my view, stiffer laws and regulations must be implemented to check pollution. Industries that release wastes without permission should be heavily fined. Cars should be equipped to minimize the exhaust they release into the air. And the use of plastic bags and disposable meal boxes should be banned. What‘s more, the media should play an important role in implanting a sense of environmental consciousness into people‘s mind. If everybody works toward a common goal of making the environment better, we can create a cleaner and lovelier world for us and for the coming generation.

点评:该预测题为社会热点话题,也是四级命题作文经常关注的环境问题,值得引起重视。本文属于解释性说明文的写作,主题是―污染‖。

1. 描述图表中人们每天开支变化情况2. 请说明发生这些变化的原因3. 结合图表对未来作出合理的预测

Changes in People‘s Daily Expenses

What is shown in the table above indicates that dramatic changes have taken place in the people‘s daily expenses from 1995 to 1999. The expenses on food have declined by 30% while those on clothing and recreation have increased respectively by 9% and 7% . The statistics of rise and fall seem to exist in isolation but closely related to one another . There are two factors accounting for these changes. Development in economy is an essential one in the five years. The increased income resulting from economic growth plays an important part in the less expense on food. Hence, a small percentage of total income is enough to cover food expense. Another one is the changes in life style. When

food presents no worry to the average, people begin to focus more of interest on handsome appearance and happy leisure time .

As a result of such a shift, spending on clothing and recreation increases year after year. From the analyses made above, we may come to the conclusion that people‘s living standards have been constantly improved between 1995 and 1999. With the further growth in economy and more changes in life style, the tendency indicated in the table will continue in the better direction .点评:该预测题属于图表作文写作,与社会生活密切相关,与1991年6月份四级考试人们饮食结构的变化图表作文写作类似。根据四级图表作文命题规律,第一段描述人们1995到1999年日常开支所发生的巨大变化;第二段分析产生变化的原因;最后一段依据图表所示变化作出了合乎逻辑的预测。文章紧扣主题,条理清楚,语言连贯,表述准确规范,结论合理。

1. 表明你的身份和事件2. 对到场领导老师的支持予以感谢并阐述体育运动所带给大家的好处3. 宣布运动会开幕并预祝此次运动会取得成功. An Opening Speech Ladies and Gentlemen,

Good morning! I am Oscar, the spokesman of the Students‘ Union. On behalf of the Students‘ Union, the main organizer of today‘s sports meeting, I welcome you all to the beautiful stadium. After two months‘ preparation, our annual sports meeting is held on schedule.

Thanks to the support and help from our school leaders and teachers. Though they have many school responsibilities, they have taken time off to take part in our sports activities. Let‘s give them a big hand. Through sports, we can not only develop our physical prowess, but also promote social and emotional skills, and even intellectual skills, which will matter in our future lives substantially. So hope everybody here cherish this opportunity and enjoy it.

At last, best wishes for the success of the sports meeting and best wishes for the good results of our athletes. It is my pleasure to announce the open of the sports meeting. Thank you and good luck!

点评:本预测题是一篇开幕词,与2005年1月竞选学生会主席演说词相仿,运动会也是在校大学生校园生活必不可少的一部分,是在校生比较熟悉的话题,有话可说,便于发挥。 1. 选择职业是一个人要面对的众多难题之一。2. 需要花时间去选择职业。3. 选择职业时可以向多人寻求建议和帮助。Choosing an Occupation

One of the most important problems a young person faces is deciding what to do. There are some people, of course, who from the time they are six years old ―know‖ that they want to be doctors or pilots or fire fighters, but the majority of us do not get around to making a decision about an occupation or career until somebody or something forces us to face the problem.

Choosing an occupation takes time, and there are a lot of things you have to think about

as you try to decide what you would like to do. You may find that you will have to take special courses to qualify for a particular kind of work, or you may find out that you will need to get actual work experience to gain enough knowledge to qualify for a particular job.

Fortunately, there are a lot of people you can turn to for advice and help in making your decision. At most schools, there are teachers who are professionally qualified to give you detailed information about job qualifications. And you can talk over your ideas with family members and friends who are always ready to listen and to offer suggestions.

The World Expo in 2010(世博会)英文作文 The World Expo in 2010

Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians. our government has promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai, as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai. How To Be A Lovely Citizen(如何成为一个可爱的上海人)

Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now. As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit. First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful. Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others. Third, I should study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future.

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze On Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1)近几年大学校园内出现―考证热‖2)产生这一现象的原因3)你的看法 Certificate Craze On Campus____、_________、_________ 行文思路

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因,提纲第3点要求谈谈―我‖对该现象的看法,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述近几年大学校园内的―考证热‖;分析越来越多的大学生热衷考取各种证书的主要原因;阐述―我‖对大学生―考证热‖的看法。 Certificate Craze On Campus

In recent years, getting a certificate has become a new craze among college students. [1]Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, [2]quite possibly, you may get the answer [3]that he or she is preparing for a certificate [2]of some kind. [4]Why does this craze appear?

[4]There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon. First, [5]it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, diploma and certificates are still important standards [6]by which many employers measure a person‘s ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another.

[7]From my point of view, we should be more rational [8]when it comes to certificates, [9]since certificates [2]do not necessarily prove one‘s ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is [10]nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability [10]but not getting a certificate of no practical value. 【亮点点评】 http://www.hxen.com

[1]祈使句使用恰当。randomly意为―随意地,随机地‖。[2]限定词使用恰当,使文章表达更严谨,增强了说服力。[3]that引导同位语从句,修饰the idea。[4]设问句引出原因,容易引起注意。[5]强调句型,此处是强调主语。[6]which引导非限制性定语从句,充当介词宾语。[7]用于引出―我‖的观点。[8]―当谈到或提及…时‖。[9]since引导原因状语从句,表示既定的原因,常译为―既然‖。[10]―只是,仅仅‖。―而不是‖。 佳句临摩

1.佳句:You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind.临摩:离婚率上升尽管令人难过,但却是不争的事实。___________________.

2.佳句:Diploma and certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a person‘s ability.

临摩: 在过去的三十年,发展中国家在许多方面都取得了很大的进步,其中包括健康水平的提高。___________________.

3.佳句:From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates. 临摩:我认为,对于我们来说,更重要的是尽可能提高自己的能力而不是获得更多的证书。 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Students‘ Pursuit for Famous Brands. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1)现在很多大学生都喜欢追求名牌2)产生这种现象的原因是什3)你如何看待这一现象 Students‘ Pursuit for Famous Brands _____、________、__________ 行文思路

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象,提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因,提纲第3点要求谈谈―我‖对该现象的看法,由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲,本文应包含如下内容:描述目前热衷于大学生追求名牌的现象;分析大学生热衷名牌的原因;阐述―我‖对大学生追求名牌的看法并提出建议。 Students’ Pursuit for Famous Brands

Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands. From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic dictionaries and pens, they [1]are inclined to buy famous brands. [2]Moreover, many students from poor families begin to [3]follow this consumption trend as well. This phenomenon has aroused wide attention. [4]The following reasons can account for college students‘ preference for famous brands. [2]Above all, in many college students‘ eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. They expect others to admire their high class and good taste. [2]What‘s more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, [5]which has a great attraction to young college students. [2]Besides, parents‘ spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit.

[2]As far as I am concerned, [6]it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands. [3]After all, most of famous brands are [7]far beyond their consumption ability. [3]Besides, [8]it is not famous brands but a person‘s noble character that really makes him

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